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Anoushka's avatar

i know i said i wanted this excerpt but HOW COULD YOU BE RUDE ENOUGH TO ONLY GIVE US A SMOL PIECE AND THEN LEAVE US FEELING DESPERATE AND DEPRIVED? i need more. like so much more. probably the whole book and then a sequel more. THIS WAS SO GOOD. dystopian isn't a genre i'm very fond of, but somehow, when it comes to the door between, I AM. I LOVE IT. i love the premise and YOUR WRITING and omg Erena sounds amazing and the rest of the characters sound so intriguing and CAN I PLEASE HAVE MORE? pretty please with sugar and a cherry and a cat on top?

it was 3 am here when you dropped this on June the 3rd and I woke up at 5 that day to read 😭 AND I'M SO GLAD I DID but then i didn't comment because i've been a little insanely busy I'M SO SORRY, but this is the greatest and did i mention i need MORE? (oh and the answer to the poll, as Happy said, is: all the options. i would gladly devour everything you write and then still ask for more, so all of it please)

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

😄😄😄 That makes me so incredibly happy!!! You are seriously one of the best readers EVER and you make it so much more fun to share my writing!!

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Anoushka's avatar

Awwww thank you 🥹 that makes me so glad!! ❤️ But TO BE FAIR, your writing is seriously amazing and I get so excited at a chance to read more, so I should be the one thanking YOU.

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

The people have spoken. She has no choice but to give us the whole thing now 😌

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Anoushka's avatar

YES! If she still refuses, we bully her with threats and bribes

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

-_- I’ll accept treats, not threats

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Anoushka's avatar

treats it is then! (and maybe threats to take away the treats if you deny us the book?)

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Whiskey, Writing & Moonshots's avatar

A really interesting start. Looking forward to more!

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

Thank you!

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Your poll didn’t leave an option for ALL OF IT, which is confusing becuase that’s the only correct answer

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

I did that on purpose because I need you people to choose!

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Rude

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

But helpful!

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

😂😂 fine lol

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

“She, in turn, chose to dispossess me of that outline in a matter of minutes.” This sounds exactly like something Erena would do 😏

I loved this so much!!!! It sounds so intriguing and the characters are amazing and I want to meet them so badly!! But now I am a) left wanting more more more and b) left concerned about which of my new best friends you’re going to kill off 😒😒😒

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

🙃

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